Love
A brilliant sight
beyond seeing
light
A ringing sound
beyond hearing
bells
A magnificent sense
beyond taste
sweet
A rose like scent
beyond smell
flowers
A feeling
beyond touch
happiness
Love
A contest entry
- Teenagers [Kids] In Love by Rilly.
550 points, ended March 9, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ooo that's so pretty ^.^
I hope you do wells in your contest
Noir xx
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i love it
i love how u used short line to emphasize the words. very piercing! less is more!!!
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very descriptive of what love feels like. I like the one word after each stanza. i dont get what bells has to do with love tho...
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