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Senses

Love

A brilliant sight
beyond seeing
light

A ringing sound
beyond hearing
bells

A magnificent sense
beyond taste
sweet

A rose like scent
beyond smell
flowers

A feeling
beyond touch
happiness

Love

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  • Noir mariposa...x
    March 11, 2008
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    Ooo that's so pretty ^.^

    I hope you do wells in your contest

    Noir xx


  • Wydra
    March 6, 2008
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    i love it

    i love how u used short line to emphasize the words. very piercing! less is more!!!


  • liduen silver member
    March 6, 2008

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    very descriptive of what love feels like. I like the one word after each stanza. i dont get what bells has to do with love tho...