Most people say im insane
While they live their life in pain
All the reasons in my mind I cant retain
Like why people like to be so vain
I just think its freakin' lame
Why do people want to be the same
Always talking in slang
All they do is entertain
I think im the only one sane
Because to no one I pertain
Im not something you can tame
Or someones whose brain you could drain
They live their life with nothing gained
Their brains are the size of a tiny grain
And all of this is such a shame
Everyones heart seems soiled and stained
Please tell me what you think
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this is a really good poem! i could never write a poem where every line rhymed. good job!
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Interesting write. A flipped view on what society usually labels one as. I enjoyed it.
Luke
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So you tried to compose a monorhyme... not bad, though the feeling is what matters there. I like your way of ranting.
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hey big bro! i havent been on in what seems to be a million years
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yea, i tried...thank you!
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The rhyme is really forced, but you probably know that already.
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