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The Winter Kitten

Her curious eyes looked around


As her paws touched the cold sidewalk

 

Her fur was covered in snowflakes

 

And frosty air filled her tiny lungs

 

Her pink nose sniffed the air

 

And finally the kitten ventured out

 

Out into the snowy land

 

The frosty snowy land of winter

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  • Sick Sunshine
    August 24, 2008

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    omg!!!

    I lost my kitten and thinking about this poem...
    makes me wonder if he will make it through Winter all lost and cold and lonely.. =[


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    Aw, this is so cute. We have fun with our kittens in the snow, haha. Nothing mean of course...when it's their first snow we just plop them out there to see what happens...they usually come back, haha.


  • Simply Simple
    March 5, 2008

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    Awwwww! How cute. Kittens in their first snow are adorable. Now... Someone bring the adorable littly puff ball inside before she gets sick. Lol! Loved this! So funny!


  • And Hyetal
    March 5, 2008

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    Aw, I thought this was cute. Poor kitty in the snow, though.

    Good job.

    ~Cassie