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Missing

The constant craving creeps
Churning in your veins
Creating colossal constraint

Yearning to be near him

 

Meager minutes melt away

Measuring out to days

Each moderately-passing moment

Morphs into massive missing

 

The longing for his lustful kiss

Leaving lonely lips sole

The listlessness of your lacking presence

Lingers long within my locked-up heart 

 

Insanity pursues insistently

An imperfection inside my innards

Impulsive thoughts flow instinctively

An insufficient try at complacency

 

But as your touch- tender, trusting-

Tends to my tragic tearful soul

The ticking of Time normalizes

Turning the triste to tranquility... 

Author notes

Alliteration much? XD


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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 10, 2008

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    Such a beautiful poem here and I adore the use of alliteration in this piece, really hits me in the sensetive areas, with your choice of words. Nicely done.


  • xXxCry-HavocxXx
    March 7, 2008
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    Very good!

    I would give you three applause, but I dont have enough points.


  • Melissa Burns
    March 6, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my humble little contest. I am having fun exsposing myself to something different. Good luck