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new rant.[read note before poem]

it doesn't make a difference
if I leave, I'm gone.
things won't change when I'm not around
just one body absent from the air
we used to breathe in so deeply
I don't care.
just let slide
its not part of some sick joke
not something to call out when your mad
upset, just yell out some rediculous phrase
to ease the pain
its not right.
i'm not gonna be there
when you get your degree
i'll be away from all that greed
so power hunger
left everyone in smoke
lie lie lie about it
till you begin to choke
rusty clouds of envy
building up in your mind
let slide. just let it slide.
to ease that stubborn mind
escaping from your roots
head strong tree collapsing as proff
build me down, let me escape
hold me back
forget all that I hate
don't tell me you care
the moment I tell you I don't
its rude, its fake
just get the fuck away
it won't matter
when I'm gone
you will be the same
everything about it
will still be wrong
you'll never change.

Author notes

sounds better when you read without breath until a period is reached. [try it if you can.]

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