All the days,
joy and laughter.
Inside my mind,
they all shatter.
Can't remember them,
I'm blind in the dark.
Steady flow of misfortune,
one by one they're lost.
Can't find the words to say,
all those days - fled away,
I've been led astray
by my own heart.
Author notes
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Comments
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nice write,
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Well done!
The emotion here is very strong, well worded and the truth follows from title to last word.
Bravo!
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i think that a lot of people can relate to this poem during those times that their own hearts are the ones that hurt them... nice job
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nice poem
expressed it well
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