He is the light that leads
It's his blood that bleeds
As I sin I push the nails deeper in
Lord I am sorry from with in
God I give you all praise
It is to you my hands are raised
You gave your son
So the spiritual battle could be won
A light that guides
that controls all waves and tides
I owe my all to you
For all you say is true
You give mercy I don't deserve
So it's only you I serve
Almighty is your holy name
You have taken away my sin and shame
Now It's my duty to shine your light
To let others see what's in sight
I'll show people your love
That shines from heaven above
I will be a lighthouse to all
And pick up those who fall
If we stand together we can be
A Lighthouse for the lost to see
Author notes
THis poem is about God and my religion. Nough said
A contest entry
- Uplifting! (Contest for Prayer and Praise Group) by MoonlitRoses.
1000 points, ended November 9, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, this is just....amazing.
Every single word is absolutely true, and makes the reader really think.
Thank you so much for entering and Good Luck!!!
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Your last few Lines really are true......there is a lot to ponder here in this write.....good luck & God bless you for entering,
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for a 16 year old your belief and faith shines through you like his bright shining light, this is a pretty good write! I think if you broke this up into stanzas added a few puctuations, You will find that it adds to the poem and brings it more to life. but it is already a beautiful write from your soul , well done!
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thanx everyone for your somments. I usually write sad poems. For once i just wanted to write a happy poem about my savoir and so I did
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well done.very well done.great description.i love how you give God all the glory.wow this touched my heart.thank you.this is a good poem. God gave you this talent and boy do you use it.great job.
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Its a really good poem. I like it. you dont see that many poems casting religion in a possitive light on here and its great that you've written such a good poem about your beliefs. great job
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THIS WRITE IS FULL OF LIGHT, YOUR PASSION SHINES RIGHT THROUGH YOUR WORDS. EXCELLENT GOD BLESS
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