Livid dawn embraces sleepy skyline
crystal dew drags in the air so fine,
light as needles pierces the gray
as atmosphere drifts away.
Silhouette sylph drawn in flight
retires to her cave after the night
tired and wary from platinum stars,
twirling shades and agate balls.
Her breath is soothing, cool and crisp
body resting in the milky mist,
skirts of frozen moisture flicker
ethereal silk sewn pearls.
A contest entry
- CAN YOU PAINT BEAUTY-BLINDFOLDED? A Twist on The Image Theme! by Blue Rew.
1439 points, ended March 10, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is an amazing personification of air, frozen.
So weary she must be with the weight of sky crystals.
I especially thought "tired and wary from platinum stars, twirling shades and agate balls" to be a line
where intricate visions came to life from the read.
Very well done to the hidden image. Blue
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Oh thank you. The title caught me instantaniously and I love how it turned out. I just sure hoped I caught up with the idea of the picture, being blindfolded and all.
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OH I loved this.
"twirling shades and agate balls" Oh how utterly unique. I LOVED that line.
I cannot wait to see the images in this contest. You have really penned a beauty here. Well done. Your last stanza brings Fog to a new dimension. Excellent.
~Pamela
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Why thank you! You don't know how thsi comment made my day. Truly. Thank you!!!!
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I look forward to your entry...smiles
Many blessings
~A~
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