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The Maiden

Colours,
scenery and light.
Such a delight,
night or day.

She watches over,
her pencil touches our hearts.
As rainbows appear before my eyes,
the world seems such a better place.

She is the maiden,
the creator of dreams.
She chases away the fear
and enlightens our hopes.

Hopes for a better place,
gaze and see,
anyone can be
happy.

One simple touch,
spring comes to life.
Just a little nudge,
a noble strife.

She is the maiden,
creator of hope,

banishment of sorrow.
She ensures
another tomorrow.

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  • RainbowGirl257
    March 8, 2008
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    i like how u have kept your lines nice and short and snappy. good luck and thanks for entering!


  • oldschooldee1
    March 7, 2008
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    you always touch my heart... I enjoy reading your poems there Beautiful