She cries,
She lives in me, my heart beats,
She haunts me, ambivalent to my love,
She stuns me, beauty abounds in every motion,
She wills me, I am hypnotized by her touch,
She has me, I am heartbroken by her smiles,
She wants me, my heart stops,
She cries.
A contest entry
- "She/He Cries" by JustAnotherIdoit.
450 points, ended March 20, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful, dad.
I love the whole thing, I can actually feel this.
Amazing job
rose ♥
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By dearest Simon, thank you for such a great poem. I can tell you had ray and I in mind when you wrote it. It was beautiful! Such emotion!!!
Love your angel,
Miley -
this is just beautiful, wonderful words for someone you love, all the best in the contest
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I love this piece!
It reads smoothly, draws you in, whispers into your ear and brings you back for more.
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My Raven,
What a job you did on this one! It is almost as if I could hear it being whispered in my ear....
Thanks I needed that right now!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
Nevermore~
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And now I have a girlfriend! Cheers to you my dear friend!
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oh this is an emotive peice the way you list it has such an effect to it and you captured the prompt powerfully well done bro
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nice write. thanks for the entry.
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