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Today was the Day

Today was the day
Some people finnally get
what I've been going through.
They see what I've been trying to get at
They finnally understand.

Today was the day I was blamed
for something not my fault
I was yelled at
The finger was pointed at me
And I wasn't the one to look at

Today was the day my stomach clenched
I didn't know what to do.
All eyes were on me
Threatening me to make a decision
And to make it fast

Today was the day I hurt somebody
I left them in the dust
I turned towards something else
And didn't turn back

Today was the day I was scared.
Everybody kept making comments
That really hurt
They didn't want to give it up
It was over for such a long time
And they kept persisting.

Today was the day I was forced to say something mean
I regret it completely now
I wish I didn't have to had said it
But it just slipped out.

Today was the day I didn't know what to say.
I was tongue tied around her
Wanting to let it out but not knowing
If she knew
or wanted to know.

Today was the day that I just felt like giving up
It was getting so easy
so simple
But it's not worth it anymore.

Author notes

ughhhhh yes I'm talking about today March 5th 2008.

UGHHHHH

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  • lizdz
    April 13, 2008

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    Interesting. It could be one day or many days. So much happening, so much emotion. It pulled me to read each stanza.


  • liduen silver member
    March 13, 2008

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    Poor KT! I don't know what happened but it sounds awful. I'm attempting to figure out what happened and if I was there....I don't think I was.....hhhmmmm. I'll stop prying now. Awesome write, great show of emotion. Amazing job!

  • SayNope2Dopex14
    March 7, 2008
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    WHAT THE FUCK AM I MISSING AND WHY DON'T I KNOW ABOUT THIS?! Thoueth musteth telleth me!..eth

  • stardust3492
    March 5, 2008
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    am I missing something?


  • LuckyBlackCat
    March 5, 2008
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    yay!!!! this is a sort-of-a kind-of-a victory poem....1...2..3... yay kt! nice job..great imagery.

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