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Invisable

The tears fall
slowly and softly.

The heart doesn't
feel anyone else.

Though the cries
can't be heard.

The hurt can
be felt.

As he sits so close
he is so very far.

So as she begins
to fade she realizes.

That he doesn't notice
no not any more.

Invisibility can be a
hurtful thing.

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  • Blood666
    March 5, 2008
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    invisibility can be a heart full thing.
    your poem was very nive i like it a lot


  • Lady Altheia
    March 5, 2008

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    It sure can. I felt invisible several times in my life. I am sorry if you feel like that. You might want to double check the spelling in your title.