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My Little Boy's Eyes (BRONZE)

I look into my little boy's eyes
it is there, I do see,
all of the kindness and love
that he feels for me.

I'm reminded of when he was small
the laughter he filled my heart with,
I almost lost him, before he was born
to me, he's my special gift.

I look into my little boy's eyes
and can't believe how quickly, time passed us by.

Mar.5/2008

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    April 20, 2008

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    A very nice write but I felt that there were so much more to be said.
    Thank you for your entry.
    Good Luck in the contest.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 29, 2008

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    Very sweet write, any parent can relate, especially when there have been challenges (I have had them too). Thank you for sharing your favorite with me, best of luck in the contest.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    March 23, 2008
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    Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck, Josie


  • B Chandler
    March 20, 2008

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    Those precious memories that only a mother would know about in how life's little miracles can change a person....keep penning


  • creationsfromheart
    March 18, 2008

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    This is so sweet and I know zactly what you are sayimg, my son is now 15 seems like he was just two begging me to go outside lol... He is also my miracle child I was never to have kids tried 9 years went througn all kinds of things nothing worked then I quit tryin and put it in Gods' hands and a year later I was pregnate! A goo dwrite which most all mothers can relate too.


  • DrunkenRam
    March 17, 2008

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    Awww, this is too touching, I have a little Boy too, they are special aren't they, I'm glad you did not lose him, and I am glad you cherish him so.
    A nice tribute to Your Son.
    Enjoy Him while You can, they all turn into Bart Simpson at about 8 years old.


  • ckwriter69
    March 16, 2008

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    awww this is a sweet write. Looking into the beauty of a little kids eyes is special. Bright, brilliant, and taking in everything they see. Thanks for sharing this wonderful write and congrats on the bronze.


  • elmundopasa1
    March 5, 2008

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    very cute and heartfelt. i loved the feeling behind the words in this poem. it is short, yet realistic and well written. an excellent job. feel free to write more for this contest, i would enjoy reading them. thanks for entering!

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