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Ice is the angel of my nightmare,
I have failed attempts to try,
Sometimes it really gives me a scare,
Though through my face I lie,

Mary Jane is the girl that's so sweet,
Sometimes she really can be a bitch,
She's the girl that's kind of neat,
Though she'll give you an itch,

Extasy I love you very much,
But now I'm curling and it's over,
I'm gonna go get some lunch,
Everyone knows you're meth undercover,

Don't take the red pill,
Don't lick the aluminin foil,
It's all a matter of will,
If it happens your mind will boil,

I burned it's wings,
And added salt to her,
Then she broke my heart,
The result...

I'm Clean...

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  • xRigoRxMortiSx
    March 7, 2008

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    lovely

    Hell yea I love it...it made me sing tht song for a sec when it says Ecstacy i love you very much....its a lovely song..i shall go listen to it now...


    • Rize
      March 10, 2008
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      thank you....i know isnt it great to remember a song out of a poem...i dont know...but thank you for your comment


  • Dirty and Broken
    March 5, 2008
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    this poem makes me intensely sad for some reason....but it's good....i like it....