Strawberries and cool whip
are a very fine treat,
you tease me with them
every time we meet.
Some are dipped in chocolate
others lay in a glass bowl,
I don't mind it at all
eating them, will be my goal.
Stop teasing me, with those
darn strawberries....
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
Mar.5/2008
Author notes
50 with the title.
I'm not good with these PIF's.
A contest entry
- Quickie pif by creationsfromheart.
390 points, ended March 5, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
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I think you did a great job - best of luck in the contest


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LOl this is greta hehe love it !


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LOL Great write Good luck with it





