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Look in the mirror and asking why
You realise you have grown and start to cry
You watch again and can't admit yourself
It's like a chapter has burnt from life's shelf

You start thinking why did this happened to you
than you look inside and don't realise the truth
Start panicking and blood is flowing threw your veins
In like a minute you start forgetting names

Take the cutting knife with a senseless aim
Of cutting your throat so there won't be pain
It's a shame
take the blame
it's the same
end the game

Someday one will know that a soul isn't here anymore
And will think about the moments that were before
let yourself on the wind's breeze so you can explore
But remember before you will leave the core
CLOSE THE DOOR

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  • Ellis gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    Very sad

    Anyone who can write so well, such good writing as this, should be happy!


  • TOXIC Single Girl
    March 12, 2008
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    hey

    this is very good and explains a lot!!!!!!!!


  • callmeZakk
    March 12, 2008
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    HOLY FUKKKKKKK******

    i like it its deep and to the point


  • Dont Lose THE ONE
    March 8, 2008

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    This poem is awsome I love the last 2 lines they were the greatest in this poem nice job! Keep up the good work. =]