Raindrops envisioned on everything I see.
Torchering, tormenting my mind and I want to flee.
Raindrops that make my life full of sadness.
Never allowed a dry eye full of gladness.
Raindrops I'm fighting why can't I break free.
Those around never hear my quiet plea.
Raindrops encircle, drowning my memories with sadness.
There must be an end to this constant madness.
Raindrops formed prisms for my mind to see.
The light encircled and set me free.
Raindrops that hold my memories feel gladness.
They dance in the light in spite of the madness.
Raindrops hold more memories for me.
Once they saddened my heart, but then I broke free.
Author notes
With complements to the artist
http://riverofwords.org/gallery/2007/08.html
A contest entry
- SImple pic prompt quickie by StarLightResurrects.
540 points, ended March 9, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like this alot. you described your pain very well here. good job and thanks for entering.
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i like this alot.. great job
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