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After The Storm (Bronze)

After the storm is over
you hold me in your loving arms,
we watch the sunset it leaves behind
God fills the sky, with His loving charms.

The water is so calm now
not like it was before,
the sky is painted so beautifully
but it's you, that I adore.

The mountains, have been kissed with snow
and you let your loving show.

Mar.5/2008


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I used the last picture.

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  • ckwriter69
    March 15, 2008

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    Good write Cynthia, very heartfelt. I could feel the sentiment and emotions. Thanks for sharing and congrats on the bronze. Keep writing.

  • Janie5
    March 10, 2008
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    Congrat. Good write.


  • aboomer silver member
    March 7, 2008

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    Congrats. on the Bronze!!!
    This is very lovely, peaceful. Just full of beautiful images and emotion.
    Good job!
    best wishes


  • Roaddog Wolf
    March 7, 2008

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    This is a very pretty poem of wonderful loving sentiment, very soothing calm to it,

    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    March 5, 2008

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    This is so fresh and beautiful. An excellent take on the picture prompt. Good luck in the contest, my delightful friend.

    Lady D

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