the curvaceous corners
of contained consciousness
careen [against each other].
we're catching rainwater.
Author notes
Image by thaumadzo at deviantart.com
Prompt B
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie - 13 words - 10 poets - 15 minutes by Naridill.
450 points, ended March 5, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice write for a short one . . good word choices and alliteration . . liked "the curvaceous corners of contained consciousness" and "we're catching rainwater . . congrats on the trophy
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I like all the "c" alliteration here! I like the setting of a rainy day.
You definately deserved this gold.
~Cassie
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this is so amazing i am thankful id didnt get a chance to enter this one..would have lost hehe. well done hun
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SUCH a fantastic take on that prompt
Yipppeee dances around your new shiney golden beauty
Well done
Delila
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Wow. Beautiful, one of the most beautiful from you I've read.
I loved the fact of it being a journey of emotion in such few words!
Grats on the gold
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Beautifully and endearing - the smooth wording is captivating and such delicately penned.
Thanks for entering,
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I like this, it's beautiful imagery. Best of luck!
Amber Shining
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Simply beautiful. Great take on the prompt. Best of luck.
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Loveeeeed it. And the last line's a total absolute complete punch . Way to go Love and cheers, shuvi
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