I travel with gifts in hand ready to release,
Gifts of touch, gifts of time not to cease,
Words to affirm and service to give.
Extending these gifts is how I want to live.
Will you travel to me to allow us to meet
Or I am traveling down a one way street?
Author notes
Title by Robert Frost.
Poem by Melphleg
A contest entry
- Inspired by Robert Frost - Titles Are Us by CitrineSunrise.
1200 points, ended March 9, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and well done. Short, but well expressed.
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Your last two lines were very interesting and provided a fitting conclusion to this short verse. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz
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Love can never be a one way street and you have captured the title most excellently. Excellent rhythm and rhyme kept this flowing solidly. Thank you for a lovely entry and best of luck in the contest.
Joyce 
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