A tear drop falls
It hits the ground, with not one sound.
A silent cry for help.
If only one person knew the burden she kept
The countless tears she constantly wept.
As the final drops crawled down her face,
Her poor sick heart begins to pace
Feeling her mistakes were impossible to erase She would leave not one sign,not one trace
She weeps
A silent tear
A contest entry
- SImple pic prompt quickie by StarLightResurrects.
540 points, ended March 9, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow this basically has told my story for the past few days. i just broke up with my boyfriend and feel like im crying silent tears the whole day....great job
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this is sad but also very beautiful. nice job and thank you for entering
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tara! i can relate to this, a lot. i loved it. it was pretty but so sad all at the same time. ♥ amazing job, girl.
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so sad .. i can relate to this really good job
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