Held in hands of glass and fire
A shadow of a dream still new
Held in hands of glass and fire
Will the light return to make this dream true?
Held in hands of dark and light
A whisper of a careless thought
Held in hands of dark and light
What realities could be wrought?
Held in hands of air and ice
A wish on breathless lips
Held in hands of air and ice
What's left in life's eclipse?
Held in hands of flesh and blood
A heart still warm and whole
Held in hands of flesh and blood
Here lies the purity of soul.
A contest entry
- SImple pic prompt quickie by StarLightResurrects.
540 points, ended March 9, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Wow! Great Write!
I like your word usage and your compare and contrast method. I.e.> Flesh and blood, Air and ice.
My favorite line is:
"Whats Left in life's eclipse?"
Great Stuff!
> mandy
-Thanx for the poetry comment! means a LOT!
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glass and fire...dark and light...air and ice...flesh and blood... so many comparisons all meaning the same thing. wonderful poem and good luck
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