I see what should be seen by all,
But by none it is viewed.
Traveling through mindscapes that none have treked,
Yet all have maps.
Space devides and calls me into the rift,
Yet I'm not allowed beyond the light.
A contest entry
- SImple pic prompt quickie by StarLightResurrects.
540 points, ended March 9, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sad poems wanted!!! by EmmaLuLu.
450 points, ended April 17, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'm thinking you can all guess who this poem is about, it's still me. Just a bit greener than usual.
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i think of drems here, travelluing down landscapes of the imagination thinking we are alone but we are not for so many others dream too of the same things
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this one is unique. when you compare it to the other poems in this contest, they all use different words for the same type of mindset. this one goes beyond the prompt into the possible meaning behind it. very nice and best of luck to you
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