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Still waiting

Sometimes i think
If this friendship shall sink
Will you miss me
like im missing you
Remember all the things we've been through?
We've suffered through pain
Sang in the rain
Done unsmart things
that we're partically insaine
Held me when i cried
laughed when i laughed
Always proud when i succeeded at math
Never looked at me with eyes of shame
Went along with my thousand nicknames
Patient and friendly when i picked at your brain
But it seems like you changed...
You always loved me when i hated myself
And now it seems you could care 2 times less
Confusing like chess...
I just need to know
in your life i mean more...
Give me what Im asking for

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  • Zephyr the Red
    January 31

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    I hate it

    When you know things are just going so good for so long..
    And BAM!
    It is over..
    Like on of my Girlfriends..
    She is this totally amazing girl, and she still is, but like.. Everything got so messed up and weird and sick that any emotional sustenance for love that I had for her fell to the floor, and I hated it because really when she said she loved ME I felt like she was for real and she did and I knew when I said it to her I was so for real..
    And then she ran away with my best friend..
    And we are friends now, again, but it is all so different...


  • Emotional-wreck
    October 17, 2008
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    tanisha

    this poem really touched me in a place that havent been touched in a while you know this is really amzing love you and i will stalk you by


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    This is good

    Often friends say more through their actions than in words .Like being there when your down and golding you when your sad but the times where they just show up and say nothing is they just prefer your company near them when they need to think . Thats great to


  • i-love-my-bra
    May 14, 2008

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    good luck i like this, it just seems to fit together perfectly its sad when friendships deteriorate isn't it