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After the Storm

on the leaf the water sits
that what happens when
mother nature has her fits

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  • Janie5
    March 10, 2008
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    Good write.


  • Blooming Poet
    March 6, 2008

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    I love the thought of motherr nature having fits, great picture in my head. Such a great use of minimal words. Perfect rhyme to, its kinda catchy. Love it.


  • LotusRyda
    March 5, 2008
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    nice

    short and simple


  • Candy6
    March 5, 2008
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    Nice write.