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Sunday

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Sunday playing wasting time
wishing for her dreams.
wanting fun with butterflies
and boats afloat a stream.

Sunday laughing making tales
of dolphins, birds and fish.
cresting waves with open sails
disappearing with a wish.

Sunday holding with small hands
her hopes for all to see,
Her wants and needs and all her plans
on show for you and me.

Sunday raining nowhere to play
except inside her room.
There's nothing left to do today
'cept play to forget the gloom.
 
 

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I hate it when it rains on a Sunday...

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 6, 2008
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    Very beautiful write, quite lovely. Best of luck in the contest.


    whisper


  • individuality gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    ah sundays are meant for wasting time i think, if you do not go to church they are lazy days a good poem


  • StarLightResurrects
    March 5, 2008

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    I really like this poem and the rhyme is great! its a really great write so thank you for entering and good luck! (though i ♥ the rain!)


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 5, 2008

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    awww i hate the rain aswell i love how you got this from the prompt. when i saw the prompt i thought a girl crying over many dreams lost in the wind.hehe