Crystalline raindrops cascading down
like lonely tears from a broken heart
While grey clouds weep upon the ground
to give this day a fresh new start
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest 10 entries by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended March 12, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely. You establish the presence of grief and the promise of renewal in four short lines. Very well done and appropriate to the picture. I like it.
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Thank you much, I am glad you liked it ~Bret~
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Sounds like a beautiful renewal to me. Very well written in my minds eye. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli -
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Thank You ~Bret~
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