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Pure..

Something so pure and whole...
could only come from you..
this love is true..
like a cool morning's dew..

A contest entry

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  • tightrope
    March 5, 2008

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    Very good depiction of the picture prompt. Because it is so well done, I'd almost like to see you take it a few lines further.


    • Requiem-For-The-Past
      March 5, 2008
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      maybe after the contest, ill add more onto it... because i had like 20 more words originally but due to the limits, i couldnt add more lol. So i thought that place would be a good stopping point without losing the flow of it.