Something so pure and whole...
could only come from you..
this love is true..
like a cool morning's dew..
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest 10 entries by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended March 12, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very good depiction of the picture prompt. Because it is so well done, I'd almost like to see you take it a few lines further.

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maybe after the contest, ill add more onto it... because i had like 20 more words originally but due to the limits, i couldnt add more lol. So i thought that place would be a good stopping point without losing the flow of it.
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