How dew I love thee?
Let me count the crystallite.
Metallic, gilded kisses,
We share the clear substance,
Coursing through our zigzag veins
Love me, before Sol arrives
Dew it.
Author notes
PENNED 3/5/2008 PHOTO FOUND @ FLICKR
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest 10 entries by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended March 12, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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OMG! What clever metaphors. Your user name is so appropriate! Do you have any idea how good you are? Saw the photo..saw your entry, NOT entering. Not that mine would be any less, BUT yours is pure gold. I love it! Love the use of the name Sol (sun). Such a tightly woven story of early dawn or illicit sex? This is one that should be published.
Shana
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