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Solitude

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...And I feel it rain
           on Wednesday
               on someday


when no one sees me crying

and I can just be...

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    Sigh.... I feel like this poem today, so sad and hauntingly beautiful... goodluck in the contest

    Karen


  • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
    March 5, 2008
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    mhm

    I love the rain. <3333 NOUGH SAID =] this is beautiful.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    March 5, 2008
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    great write


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    March 5, 2008

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    I hear you!

    Beautifully expressed.


  • Malabu
    March 5, 2008

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    to cry...it does not matter if the sun shines or the sky is gray...in the night more fitting...but to cry in the morning before the sun rises...
    sleepless are those nights...
    guess I just think to much...

    love the poem you've written
    Mal


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 5, 2008

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    wow this is truly beautiful the wording is perfect and really adds effect to the picture well done with this mommy

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