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Dear John Letter

To you,
  yes, you...you know
who you are
    I just can't do this
  you've torn my heart
apart
  You tell me lies
and you think
I believe they are
true
  but you know what?
to hell
  with you
Keep your lies
  and those other women too
cause to be honest
I'm to good for you
So do me a favor
and Kiss my
ass too

      Signed
A Pissed off Girlfriend

Author notes

Just a poem! Didnt have anybody really intended! but can go for Carlos & Chris.

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    March 12, 2008

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    LOL the end made me laugh out loud
    That is how we all should act, shed tear to those who don't deserve is such a waste of fluids.


  • lake of dremas
    March 5, 2008
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    lol, funny! nice and well said except kiss my ass! lol
    but very true


  • Lotus-Mama
    March 5, 2008
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    Nice poem! Great flow. (Line 17 - to should have 2 o's- too)