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Two Shadows That Cross

first it is bitter
and hard to swallow
but the rubies rush
ecstasy though my veins

i lick my plate dry
of all of the mess
as i hunger for more
than a common whore

you capture me with
your liquid eyes
pools as dark
as the oceans are deep

one stare and you smile
and i am happy to note
that i am not the only one
seeking a fortune in blood

a swift little dance
of gestures and words
but through your eyes
and your lips
my heart was always yours

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just wanted to write a quick, imagery expressive vampie poem! it took me all of ten minutes, so it probably is not my best tell me what you think!

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  • Immortal Flesh
    March 7, 2008

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    Dark romance!

    The first stanza was a great start! the last one was an even better finale! Two shadows sharing one common thing. But it means more than just a common thing between the two. It is as said, something of fortune, something of great value to their very existence. And what better way to share it with someone as dark as you!


    • pinkstardust13
      March 7, 2008
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      very true sir, very true! do you know any more vampire lovin' weirdos like us on here? or are we the only ones that share the same dark thinking?