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play the fool, puppetter

baby, maybe im not what you thought
but you are the thought in my head
circling like a vulture within my brain
praying on my spirits appetite
loving me towards insanity

you could pull me into an endless abyss
but i would always love you
always need you
but i have to let you go
always say this to my self on nights like this

when the bells are ringing down snowy death
of your sunshine blanketing my darkness
baby baby, aren't you ready to come clean?
sweetie sweetie, give me my wholeness back? no?
you lie.

play my strings again, thoughts in my head
play me the fool, puppeteer holding me dead
I'm trying not to destroy myself
with your laughter meddeling in my hand
clear the bed off, make a mess of me

dissect what you have done

see the records of your lies untold

you have broken me and i still love you

rain rain, pour away onto these open wounds

puppeteer, play with your fool trapped in your love

 

 

 

 

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  • ShesaDangertoHerself
    March 29, 2008

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    I love the wording, your way or saying things
    I think the last two lines are my favorite
    but I really like the whole thing


  • Perfectly Imperfect
    March 5, 2008
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    A very powerful piece of writing.

    "dissect what you have done
    see the records of your lies untold
    you have broken me and i still love you
    rain rain, pour away onto these open wounds
    puppeteer, play with your fool trapped in your love"

    I love that stanza. This is a really good take Well done and thank you for entering x