Tell me you think im gorgeous
Say you love me with all your heart
Tell them im your one and only
Say you want to hold me and do it
Tell me im the only girl who makes you feel that way
Say you want me in your life forever
Tell me everything I want to hear
Say everything will be ok
Tell me this all ; Just Lie To Me
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So just heads p, im fine i am not sad or anything just felt like writeing this, hope it was ok much love..xoxox
what chea think...?
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Wow,
A very well expressed piece you have weaved here sweet one.
So many would rather be lied to, than know what one truly feels inside.
Mainly from low-self esteem, and want what they feel is a dream.
Again, well done, and thanks for sharing you!
-Dad.
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Yes... just lie to us, so we won't have to admit the truth. Lie to us, so tht we can hide behind our feelings too.
Lie to us, to make everything seem alright.
Lie to us, in the deepest of the darkest night.
very good insight here. I loved it much!♥ -
We're all susceptible to lies, so why not indulge int them? Great write!
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A beautiful poem enjoyed reading
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Love the form.
And sometimes i do feel this way, because i swear lies do taste so much sweeter than the truth (for the moment) until they're gone forever.
gorgeous write bby <3
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Hmm. Tell, say, tell, say...not sure the repetition works for me. I would just cut those words entirely. Use words like that and and instead if you must. I would change "hold me and do it" to "hold me close." Or something like that. Also, good grammar is your friend. Don't forget apostrophes. This is another sad write. I think you have very good potential, your raw emotions are strong. I liked this.
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