Our life is short and long outlived,
And yet its our first and last resort.
A contest entry
- 13 poets ~ 13 words by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended March 4, 2008, 13 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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when i read the title i though of the song last resort (amazing song) but this was so different from that poem that i was very happily surprised and i love how you gave meaning in a 13 words
thanks for entering -
wow... thats a thought provoking one right there.


