Here's a pink rose
to show some care,
and to wish you
a Happy Birthday there.
It has grown
to meet your needs,
on rain and sunshine
this rose feeds.
Seen with the heart
just let it show,
a smile inside,
a special glow.
Your happiness
plays a major part,
when you believe
what's in your heart.
A Birthday wish,
the best in mind,
that beautiful pink rose
the imagery kind.
When life seems rough
or just unfair,
you have friends
who truly care.
Author notes
Poetess12
A contest entry
- BFFL's Birthday!!!! (I REALLY NEED ENTRIES PLZ!) by Jeneralix.
900 points, ended March 9, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was a great poem. I loved how you used the rose. It is a truly amazing poem. I loved every part of the poem. I liked the last part a lot. When life seems rough or just unfair, you have friends who truly care. I think that was the best part. Great write and thanks
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Thank you so much for enterin and I know she'll love it
You did a really nice job with the random options
I'll comment more when I get a chance. Promise
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