Calm pool
Prowling trout lurks
Line whispers graceful arc
Gentle placement of tied aphid
Supper
Author notes
this is one of my first attempts at the cinquain form. the syllable count is 2,4,6,8,2. Let me know what you think.
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very nice :)
I like it.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. It is one of my favorites.
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WONDERFUL
My you are a talented young chappy! Your writes are wonderful Charley, you are doing so well,learning all these new forms.It's always a pleasure reading something from you, I can see how your talent is growing with every new write that you post.I'm so proud of you! This write is full of imagery and you have painted a wonderful picture in the mind of the reader.
Keep up the great work,so I may feast upon your written words.
Take care and many blessings to you.
~Angel~
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Thank you Angel, I really enjoyed how this one came out. It was fun. I did three more of these I will post at a later time. Always love hearing from you. Thanks as always for reading and commenting.
lots of love,
Charley
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So this is cinquain form? I never knew what it was, its something I wouldn't want to take on, but I will that this poem was very enjoyable and quite humorous too if I made add. Not much of a fly fisher, more of a salt water fisher, but you know as you read this poem again its so relaxing.
I can just picture one man standing in a river bed just casting his line back and forth out. I can also hear the water running and smell that fresh water smell. Ugh now I really want to fish right now thanks!
But sure do love this poem, now I want to read more of this cinquain form poems, but I know that this one will be one of my top favs. You did an excellent job!
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I really enjoy this form, I went on a rampage one day and came up with four cinquain poems. I'll post the others soon but out of the four this was my favorite. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks again.
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Memories
Hot coals
Potatoes foiled
Fillet of trout is done
Pup tent and sleeping bag full of
Scout dreams
ck, Thanks for the memories
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You're welcome. Lots of memories with this one. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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The cinquain is another form that I've found enjoyable, and yours has an unexpected but of humor there at the end. This is a fine example of a cinquain!
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, I really enjoyed how this one came out. By simply stating supper at the end. The reader can automatically imply that the fish was caught without having to say so. Thanks again, I appreciate it.
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Excellent
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
CK, you have done such a wonderful job with this one.
Well done my friend.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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Thank you Cynthia for reading and commenting on this write. I've written several more of the cinquin form and found them to be quite adictive. But this was my favorite. Appreciate your comments very much.
Charley
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