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[ night sweats ]

night sweats
under blanket body chilling
runny nose saying enough

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  • Pollycheck
    March 6, 2008

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    night sweats
    under blanket body chilling
    runny nose saying enough

    Thank you for entering my contest. I really like the way that you have written thisd haiku. You have done a good job with this one.


  • moluv10
    March 5, 2008
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    funny!! funny pic! best of luck in the contest.


  • PerVirtuous
    March 5, 2008
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    Nice... now write one called night sweets!


  • Layne
    March 5, 2008

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    HAHAHAHAHA, LOVE THIS, I love humor in poems,