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Good or Bad Call?

Snow falling
windsheild wipers cleaning
the heated air
coming from the vents
her on the phone
car twisting down a
windy road.
With the snow falling
and tunnel vision ahead
that curve I'll never forget.
The screaming
the brakes squealing
then it all stops.
I wake up
in the hospital
mother dead
cell phone
lies beside my hospital bed
remember the words
you hear today

---never talk while you're on the cell,
you may lose the ones you love
just but a slight curve in the road

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bored,decided to write something that could get a word out to ppl

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  • xPoisonxDollx
    March 16, 2008

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    whoa.....this is great...so meaningful. so, so meaningful....such astounding imagery, and such a great message. this is great honey, effing great!!!
    xx amy