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Let Go

Beauty in the breakdown baby
that's what I'm looking for
it's time to stop looking to you for all my answers
cuz sometimes pretty eyes hold ugly lies,
like every word you speak.
Time for me to blink and if you don't leave that fast,
I'll rinse, repeat.
Rinse off every damn grain,
bit of you
that crawls down my skin,
each time I hear your name,
like a soothing virus, you infect my soul.
It's long been time, time to let go.
So, I'll leave
just let me go.

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  • autumns rising
    March 5, 2008

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    I remember when you imed this to me. It still amazes me darling! Great write and I'll love you unconditionally for all time!


  • tawk gold member
    March 5, 2008

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    Wow what a deep write about letting go. Amazing imagery and emotion. I so enjoyed reading, have a wonderful day my friend