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Hidden Prophet

Holding onto an untruthful hope
Missing the pieces on the path of life
There's no denying that things that are meant to be done
Knowing the possible ends of facing the reality
Undeniable past showing the consequences of the future
Shouting out the silent words into the night
There, the darkness held onto the secret
Never been told to a living soul

On the boundary of destruction
Arisen the sinful chaos of the depth
Deafening the pleads from the above
Darkness resurfaces as the prophet tells no lies
Bloodshed of sacrifice
Ancient one are forever lost and forgotten
Revealing no secrets 
Invisible in the depth of the space

Hidden dreams in the world of fantasy
Creating the love that’s never there


*Moments that is losing to the timeless storm*

Author notes

Finally this is the first time that I written something in a long time...my muse is coming back I hope...tell me what do you think

P.S I know it might not be my best but it's a starts^^

Mina

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  • CrazyMeLovesYou
    March 5, 2008

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    I LOVE IT MINA~ you have such a weird mind when you talk with me though, but your poems are so, like the opposite of you, i'm really proud of you!


    • Falling Destiny
      March 5, 2008
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      Thanks Cece

      Thanks Cece!!! I know I'm weird so ya have to deal with it so basically you could say that this is my dark side lol also me being happy is also my real side too (light side) lol it's just me and my creative thoughts and you know it...I can get serious at times and you know the consequences for that don't ya?

      love ya
      Mina


  • SapphireStars
    March 4, 2008
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    It's beautiful~ I love your abstract poem Mina Not only that, it flows very well, with your thoughts organized in here to delivery a windswept, cool, and slightly lashing breeze.

    And you know what? Your muse has come back Or better yet, it's probably always been with you ^-^ Keep writing Mina! -huggles -

    Ibs~ <3


    • Falling Destiny
      March 5, 2008
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      Thanks Ibar

      Thanks Ibar! glad you like it and I guess you might be right...I might just have my muse all of this time and never notices it it's been awhile for me to actually type something down so like I say it's a start I was thinking to write another poem but I guess I just have to wait and see...

      Lots of love
      Mina