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Hello, My Heart

 

 


Hello my heart,

did you hear...
every thought I thought,
every I love you that
I said-

did you feel...
every beat,
every touch,
every raindrop
that touched me?

did you smell...
the fresh morning air,
the rain on the trees,
the fragrance of Spring
in the air?

do you know...
that I meant
every thought,
every word,
every I love you

that I said.



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  • Draig aine gold member
    March 4
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    congradulations on the bronze thingy

    awesome write


  • Trill - Trickle
    February 4

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    I absolutely love this poem!

    When I first started reading it grasped my attention.

    I wanted there to be more!
    Such a beautiful job you did!
    Keep up the fantastic work!

    Thank you for entering!

    ~ Trill


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 3

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    awwwwwwww precious indeed with an everlasting pure heart well done and many loving blessings always xxx


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 3, 2008

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    Thank you so much for sharing your favorite with me, best of luck in the contest.

    ♥
    whisper


  • earthstar
    March 27, 2008

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    It speaks of love it a very touching. Sometimes we let life live us instead of living it. You brought the words to life. Sometimes it the simple things we miss.
    This is very lovely


  • penman gold member
    March 16, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very well done. So lyrical and touching. Best of luck in the contest.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 7, 2008

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    Excellent

    Yes indeed the minds whispers of love is so often seen upon the face for a woman in love truly glows if she is loved as much from her man


  • imperfectperfection
    March 6, 2008

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    Absolutely Beautiful

    Sweetheart I can see why is this your favorite poem & yes you do know me - I love this poem... simple words that are deeper than seas... such a heartfelt poem with a gentle touch to one's heart and soul... very beautifully penned masterpiece my dear... thanks for sending me the link... I absolutely love it.. keep such words flowing... take care Minoo


  • Amera gold member
    March 5, 2008

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    This is a truly beautiful love poem. You actually have an on going conversation with your heart which is actually his.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    March 5, 2008

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    Yeah Twinsy,
    You were so right I did love this one.
    It's my kind of poetry, something that
    I would have written. It amazes me st
    times how much we think alike.
    Very lovely piece of poetry you have here.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • NoMoreSorrow
    March 4, 2008

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    I really liked this.. it was very sweet! I like how you show love as more than a feeling by using other senses... great job!!!


  • TizMoi
    March 4, 2008

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    Great Stuff

    Very well written indeed. Great images and sentiments in a cute kinda way. Well done, keep up the great work.

  • emLeejo
    March 4, 2008

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    very nice.. i really liked the "did you feel" stanza. but i think this is a very good poem and its cute.. bravo! Well done!


  • Mrs. Mautino
    March 4, 2008

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    I"m sure they got the "letter" asking them, Mom, and I am sure they felt and heard and smell and heard everything great write!
    Love, Little One


  • stavykm gold member
    March 4, 2008

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    So Beautifully Romantic

    I just loved this poem. You did an excellent job! I love how you expressed your emotions and feeling and then asked if your partener felt them too. Beautiful, romantic poem. Thank you for sharing with me. I've missed you and much love coming your way.
    Blessings
    Your sis and friend
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


    • StarEyes
      March 4, 2008
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      Thanks Kelle... I think this may just be one of my favorites that I have ever written. I am proud of the way it came out as well!

      I have missed you too.

      Love ya my friend and sister

      Nyetta


  • Candy6
    March 4, 2008
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    Well written. Nice flow.

  • Lucille
    March 4, 2008

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    This is another well written piece I like the way it kinda makes your heart melt, but still pull you in wanting to to know more


  • Desire gold member
    March 4, 2008

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    Ooooooooooh!!

    This is Beautiful and love the emotions also the images with sentiments You have expressed~

    Love this!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

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