Will I live dreams,
traversing
this barren path?
or find sleep
too soon?
In a list
A contest entry
- Not so well by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended March 4, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lets hope
Lets hope that all your dreams come true & your life is one lasting & beautiful
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Lovely counterpoint, between living one's dreams, and sleeping (or resting or dying) too soon to make them real. Excellent use of limited words. Very good title, especially with photo and "traversing this barren path." I enjoyed this
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Excellent
Could you send me some of your talent?
Joe
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Thanks so much, Joe.
*talent* *talent* *talent*--use it wisely!
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Wonderful take on the prompt, congrats on the gold hugs, Bunny
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I never would have imagined this verse for the prompt, but it is wonderful. Congratulations on your trophy and your perceptions. Peace, Liz
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Congrats on a well deserved gold. You have penned an awesome piece.
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Short, and awesome. Congrats on the gold.
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Thanks, TY.
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This is so creative and such an amazing take on the prompt ~ well done fine poet... Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings, Lavender Butterfly.
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Wow this is a fantastic take on this prompt, you took it outside the box, well done and goodluck in the contest
Karen
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