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The wings of your pretty lilac butterfly

Bleeding lips; escape breathed sighs
Sun drenched heart now covered in shadows
Faded bruises but new within
How can she survive like this? , Doesn’t she see we love her?
My rainbow in a cloudy sky
I love you

But.
I know how you feel beautiful
Like even through we are here
Inside your heart... when it really matters
We are not here, you’re alone

But you are not my rainbow
If you look deep within
You will see we colour each bit of your heart
Just listen to the wind
You will feel me
Even if you don’t see me

You’re such a blessing
To all of those around you
Even if you do not see it, even if we don’t see it

But
I am your pretty lilac butterfly
I will always love you

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  • penman gold member
    March 7, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    March 5, 2008

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    Wow this is immense.. I love the background too. Could you let me know if I'm allowed to use it? this is an amazing write I really enjoyed it. Best of luck in the contest. xxxxxx

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    March 5, 2008

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    I love this sweety you have done a lovely job as always be well best wishes and much love always


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 4, 2008

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    this is so beautifully written sis and eventually i will read it and nod with every word but at the moment ill just let the feeling of being used take over and curl up in sleep again


  • Erika Elektrikka
    March 4, 2008

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    This is so beautiful sissy.

    "Sun drenched heart, now covered in shadows" = fave line




    Love you!
    erika

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