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light in darkness




in the dark evening
there are still shadows in place
and i claim shadows





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  • Manicmuze
    March 5, 2008

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    ... there is a breeze rushing in
    i claim the wind
    :-)

    thought i'd stop by and say "hi", nice to see you
    ~ w


    • Jacob Jesus Escape
      March 7, 2008
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      You can claim the wind, W. I am not a sailor or a glutton for the punishment of change!~)
      It's good to have you stop by...


  • Kelli Marie
    March 4, 2008

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    Short but very well written. I enjoyed the read. I like the still shadows line. Very well done.
    Kelli