I was content within my shell
Where neither pain nor sorrow fell
All alone, all to myself.
My love, my heart, stored on a shelf.
Like a shelter against the pouring rain
To block the hurts and ease the pain.
I was comfy curled, into a ball.
breaking cold wind with my walls.
Then I heard the voices speaking
Crowds of people, wondering, seeking
Breaking down my Isolation
Decomposing my situation
Proclaiming that they cared for me
Oh!! Isolation set me free
A contest entry
- A little lonely rainbow by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended March 19, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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this is dark and beautiful. i realy like the word play. it is great. keep writing.
KNIGHT TIME -
beautifully written and the plea in your words really adds the effect of feeling lonely/. thankyou and best of luck
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