I hate the fact I love you
I hate the fact I care
I hate the fact you're always right
I hate it when you're not there
I hate when you don't hold my hand
or hug me when I'm sad
I hate the fact my friends care more than you
I hate the fact that i know it's true
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short and to the point..love it alot..my fave part is well the whole thing..every word of it was good..i didnt not like any of it..great job!
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i would hate it too if this is how it was for me, which it pretty much is except i feel i have no friends at all sometimes so technically the one that i love cares more than my friends. idk but i like this one thank you.
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i really think you captured your hate to this person in a very artistic way i might not have been able to do that, i specialize in long death, not short hate . . . he he
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I like it alot! i kinda feel like that sometimes
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this sounds like a bit of a rythem in a way. But in the first para* toy used the 2 and 4th to interact, The on the 2 para* you choose to use the 1 and 2nd to and 3 and 4th to interact, maybe that is your purpose, but over all it is good
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