Catch hold of oblivion, take me there in wilting wings,
a silhouette of darkness hiding the most splendid things.
The constellation figured out in your deepest azure eyes,
a waterfall of exuberance lets go of the clever disguise.
Rapture fill me whole as I fly through the universe,
I'll whisper a tale woven with laughter in each simple verse.
The climax will hold a surprise for all as the stars burst brightly,
promises etched into infinity, never to be taken lightly.
Watch the sun illuminate the sky as the moon bows down in defeat,
as happiness engulfs my dreams so deeply in my sleep.
Author notes
option 4-rose blood 87-wrote this for that exact picture
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OH wow wow wow, I LOVED the accompanying image with this piece, it took my breath away -
and a beautiful poem you wrote to go with it, very inspiring! thanks for entering -
Great piece, goes well with the prompt! Great flow, imagery, and rhyme! Great job and good luck!
♥ Kathraina -
This is a beautiful poem
I like the imagery and the way you incoporated the word bank into such a soft story - thank you for entering (and congrats on the brinze 
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Keep writing
Polly
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i like this, it has a good flow with the the poem - this makes 4 chopices for me when i come to do the judging soon
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Very, very pretty. I love it.
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