Mother nature brings terror
with the flick of a dagger.
Darkens the sky with an area
of deathly grey, that shudders the mind.
But look close, beauty's what you find.
A contest entry
- 30 WORD QUIKIE -NATURE PICTURE PROMPT INSPIRED - CLOSES AFTER 10 ENTRIES-CHECK IT OUT by Roaddog Wolf.
550 points, ended March 4, 2008, 8 entries
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well penned and well written I like "the flick of a dagger" good write, enjoyed the read
Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest
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excellent work great imagery Good luck
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For thirty words you have written a nice piece of poetry. One thing I will point out is in the last line, "Beauties" I think you mean beauty's. Other than that, very nicely done.
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