Launatic...

Million thoughts shredded
memories wasted shriveled discarded
wilted neurons misfiring
isolated moments,
reality sickening light
enough
goodbye...

Author notes

Decaying Isolation

A contest entry

A little lonely rainbow by x-Black-Butterfly-x. 300 points, ended March 19, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Whatever you like...

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Frogzter
March 17, 2008

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Happens to me all the time! The perfect description of the prompt! Good luck in the contest!

Frogz~
DeadlyPoetic88
March 11, 2008

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Interesting.......... Not sure really what to make of it...... I'll leave it at that.... note: my not knowing what to make of something could have to do with my being tired.
Bob Fox
March 5, 2008

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Enough
To finalize our being. Justification for one disgusted? Who knows but these thoughts have often entered this old SOBs mind
x-Black-Butterfly-x
March 4, 2008

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wow this is so beautiful and emotional and you have captured the prompt so amazingly. well done bro luves ya
movedon
March 4, 2008
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Very good write Simon. Was beautiful and emotional

Broken
StarEyes
March 4, 2008

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What a read this one is! OMG!!!!! I would say you captured "isolation" quite well in this one! One can almost see it!!

Best of luck in this contest!

Nevermore~
Kelli Marie
March 4, 2008

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Very nicely written. A bit lonely and alone. Great imagery. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck.
Kelli
SilencefillsMySoul
March 4, 2008

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Amazing
so many emotions in just 7 lines. The emotions displayed here are so well done. I wish you luck in this contest. I think you'll do well. This piece was fantastic. Take care. Thanks for commenting on my poem.
Unsigned
March 4, 2008
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Thanks
Anguas-Confusion
March 4, 2008

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So well written, the power of the last word "goodbye" just amazing, well done. Best of luck in the contest. xxxx